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ily.the.cat posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd June 2010 6:41pm for Company

Hey, I adore this story and am re-reading it. The only thing I've noticed is that when the people are talking, you harldy ever use contractions, so it sounds like, "It is nothing," instead of ," It's nothing." The second one flows better in my opinion, but then again, I am just a lowly reader... Anyway, food for thought.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Monday 29th January 2007 12:34am for Company

I think you've done quite a credible job of having Dumbledore make an intial approach to Harry for a degree of reconciliation. Your Harry was a little bit petulent, at that moment, but I can't blame him for anything you had him feel or say. After all, he is still a teenager in spite of everything. But you also had Harry go forward some with Dumbledore, and that is important - a great first step for both of them.

Your Harry and Hermione together were insightful and funny.

Terrific work!