Stonebrow posted a comment on Saturday 18th August 2007 4:41am for Goodbyes

Having read this a second time, I find it is one of my favorite fics. It is also one of the most annoying, as it just stops. There's no resolution. I mean, it's a perfect place to stop and start a new segment, but to just completely end it is so frustrating. This is a well written story with a good plot, and those are few (though there's a higher density of them here at ffa). Even if you started writing another, better story, the potential of this story is wasted without a followup. You have a great original character in Horace, and Cal and the team 2 characters could be fleshed out very well. You've left with Harry needing to get the portkey activated, and his relationship with both Snape and Draco have been redefined.
All that said, I hate it when I see reviews demanding things from authors. I realize changing locations to Hogwarts means changing many other things too. You have to deal with classes and student relation and stuff. So it is understandable if you stop for reasons like that. But if you can, I think that you would make a very good sequel to this.
Here's hoping!

busted posted a comment on Friday 17th August 2007 2:14pm for Goodbyes

Great story I really enjoyed it. I would love it if you had a sequel to this but It doest look like your starting one..

LDA posted a comment on Wednesday 8th August 2007 1:04pm for Goodbyes

love the story!! question is are you going to write the sequel?? cant leave us fans hanging can you? lol

Taillon posted a comment on Tuesday 17th July 2007 9:25am for Goodbyes

Haha, I think I'm in love!
I've been reading fic's for a few years now, and this is easily the best I've EVER read.

Hope to see it continue! And thank you for gracing us with this story :D.

Ezra'eil posted a comment on Friday 13th July 2007 12:17pm for Goodbyes

Good ending. I liked the last few chapters, and the battle scenes. Hopefully you'll write a sequal.and]

Tyler_A posted a comment on Monday 9th July 2007 10:38pm for Goodbyes

I love this story. I would like to point out that they whenever they talk, they don't use a word like won't. It would be will not. That kinda messes it up. I hope you make a sequel.

Stonebrow posted a comment on Thursday 21st June 2007 5:16am for Goodbyes

This is just to good not to be seen all the way through. Unless you have artistic reasons for not finishing it, I think that the rest would definitely be an amazing addition. Since starting to read it, I have done nothing else but eat and sleep. Harry being an Unmentionable gives it enough potential for a sequel. Very good story.

Infin1x posted a comment on Sunday 17th June 2007 6:35am for Goodbyes

This is the first time I have read a fic that didn't go to the end of the series, truly enjoyed it and then not really cared if it was continued. While it would be nice to see the end of Harry's time at Hogwarts, the final battle and an epilogue what is already here does an excellent job of doing what needs to be done. Harry has grown up found someone to love and really feels like it is complete in the way only life can be in the sense that it will go on.

pramod posted a comment on Wednesday 13th June 2007 9:56pm for Goodbyes

excellent,very well written
do you have plans for a sequel? i mean the the school year and seventh year.Waiting for your next book eagerly.

with regards
pramod.

Jimmy posted a comment on Tuesday 12th June 2007 2:31pm for Goodbyes

hello. I'm a huge fan of this story. I was just wondering why don't you do a sequel??? the way you ended it BEGS for a sequel!

Please at least answer that question.

Thanks.

Jimmy

Jimmy posted a comment on Sunday 10th June 2007 12:59pm for Goodbyes

just curious, are you going to put up a sequel any time soon?

Carol Layland posted a comment on Monday 28th May 2007 2:29am for Goodbyes

There really should be a sequel to this. You have left it as a cliff hanger and that is not fair.

biged78 posted a comment on Friday 25th May 2007 2:43am for Goodbyes

Just wanted to say that I enjoyed this story (for the second time) and was wondering if and when you were planning on a sequel.

Cynthia1850 posted a comment on Tuesday 8th May 2007 12:17pm for Goodbyes

Fantastic story. You are a wonderful writer. Everything flowed, very exciting, very sexy. I hope someday you will find the time to write some more.

Wergan posted a comment on Sunday 22nd April 2007 12:42pm for Goodbyes

Sequel?

Stygius posted a comment on Friday 20th April 2007 6:25pm for Goodbyes

this is one of the first honks fics i read, and since then its has become my fav ship. i had hoped you would have continued the story, but alas, it is not to be.

i would like to make a request though. Is it possible for u to send me a copy of the complete story, i.e. all the chapters as an adobe copy or another software. I am requesting this from all my fav authors, so far the responses have been positive.

Also, if you are not able to continue this story, can i temp you into prehaps writting another story. a fresh one. which may have aspects of this story, but also a new fresh concept. i know we all have many ideas, but not all have the talent to express them on papers as you do... i would hope you consider this too...

congrats with ur employment, and i hope to hear from you. cheers and well done (again)

Stygius.

stygius . destiny @ gmail . com

lorddwar replied:

I am editing this story and once everything is done, I will post the story in a Word .doc on my Yahoo page.

Thank you for the review.

Lord Dwar

unclebravo posted a comment on Wednesday 18th April 2007 4:30am for Goodbyes

I have never left a review for any of the stories that I have read but after reading this one I felt the need to review.
All I can say is bravo!!! If this was in print, I would buy a copy.
Some authors go too far with "superhero" harry or "super powerfull" harry but you were able to bring out the best without going overboard.
Hopefully you will continue with this story as it is excellent and could go much further.
I have always been a fan of Harry/Ginny but after reading this story like the Harry/Tonks story line much better.
Thank you for a wonderful story.

Cale posted a comment on Monday 9th April 2007 4:55am for Goodbyes

This won't end here, will it? It will continue right? Or a sequel? Even if this story was titled "The Summer of Change" and with the summer up...

Come on, you owe it to the people. After all, you made them mad and crazy about this tale of awe inspiring events.

So you rule, end of discussion. Love it.

kb0 posted a comment on Saturday 7th April 2007 1:47pm for Goodbyes

Thanks for sharing this story. I have nothing insightful to add that others already haven't, after reading a few other reviews, but I would like to add encouragement for you to write a sequel. You have some very interesting open questions that I'd love to see how to answer them. It was a riveting story, and the first Harry/Tonks that I've read. You've mean reasonably realistic, which is part of what made it so enjoyable.

Darke Gray posted a comment on Thursday 5th April 2007 3:09am for Goodbyes

I loved this story, I don't know if you are planning a sequel or not but I hope you do. This has got to be one of the best, if not the best, Harry/Tonks stories out there. I really hope you continue it, I especially want to see how Harry gets Dumbles to grant him the Portkey. Also how Harry deals with Snape as a teacher and Malfoy. With Harry's new attitude, Malfoy wouldn't last 10 minutes against Harry without having at least one bone broken. Anyways, great story.

DG