alan g posted a comment on Thursday 22nd March 2007 3:48am for Goodbyes

Ohh finished,This story just grabbed me and kept me interested all the way through

jesterod posted a comment on Thursday 15th March 2007 1:12pm for Goodbyes

awesome story are you gonna do a sequel?
Jesterod@gmail.com

yeehaw posted a comment on Wednesday 28th February 2007 8:21pm for Goodbyes

This is my ansolute favorite fanfic of all times. I discovered it on a friday and I slept 3 hours tops over the weekend because I was too busy reading :-)

You are an amazing author and the storyline is awesome. I do hope that you will write more, and highest on my wishlist is of course a sequel to this story.

The highest of praise to you :-D

o.T posted a comment on Sunday 25th February 2007 1:37pm for Goodbyes

When I read this on another site I immediately thought that you hadn't updated. The ending is can go both ways. It is an easy ending to keep going and to make a sequel for. Maybe when you get holidays or whatever you should write.. I dunno, Winter of Discovery or sommat?

Anyway I liked this one one of the few Harry/Tonks out there that isn't SHIT.

IceBlades posted a comment on Friday 23rd February 2007 1:34pm for Goodbyes

Aah, great story so far. Are you planning to continue in the same title or switch to another one?

MrRigger posted a comment on Friday 23rd February 2007 1:16am for Goodbyes

This is a great story. At least I think so. Good characters, well written, and an intriging plotline. The only problem with the entire thing was you aversion to contractions. I hope there will be a sequal at some point in the near future. I look forward to anything else you plan on writing.

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Wednesday 14th February 2007 2:09am for Goodbyes

Now that I have completed this story, I am sorry to here that you are not going to write a sequal to it. There is so many things left unfinnished. I hope that as you are rewriting it you get some ideas to write the sequal. I would love to see how Harry gets DD to get his portkey time turner to work in Hogwarts, how Harry and Tonks get togather during the year, How all the girls are falling over each other to get to Harry, how Harry starts training the DA in more advance spells he has learned, more Harry vs Snape how he finds out that he has lost some memories and Harry tells the Unspeakables that he can read the Dork Lords thoughts. These are just some of the things I would like to see. This is the best HONKS story I have ever read.

MPF

dahurstsr posted a comment on Tuesday 13th February 2007 4:50pm for Goodbyes

I love this story more every time I read it. I hope you will do a sequel to it. You are one of the most well thought out and written authors in the fan fic realm. I know you will take your time with another story but when it comes out it will be excellent. Thank you for the hours of enjoyable reading.

Christopher Patton posted a comment on Friday 9th February 2007 8:20am for Goodbyes

This is such a great story, I'd love to see it continued at some point but you have set the bar so high for yourself.

Thank you for an amazing story.

Chris

vertru posted a comment on Wednesday 7th February 2007 3:01am for Goodbyes

This is a wonderful and moving story told very well. I'm glad to hear you are editing the whole thing as many of the misspellings and wrong words used were a bit confusing at times. That aside, I spent many hours enjoying your story telling ability and the depth of your imagination. Thank you for sharing your vision of a possible good summer for Harry. Well done indeed.

Vern

joeb posted a comment on Tuesday 6th February 2007 6:57am for Goodbyes

that was great when is the next one coming

jlayton03 posted a comment on Sunday 4th February 2007 1:09pm for Goodbyes

I just have one request PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY I AM A MAJOR FAN OF HARRY/TONKS AND UNSPEAKABLES SO PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY YOUR STORY IS THE BEST ONE IVE EVER COME ACROSS. also if you know other harry/tonks storys email me at jlayton03@peoplepc.com

Your devoted fan
jlayton

Dale Dietzman posted a comment on Sunday 4th February 2007 8:53am for Goodbyes

You need top stop doing that."

legobean posted a comment on Thursday 1st February 2007 1:57am for Goodbyes

Pretty good story. My first adventure into Honks.

Ronnee posted a comment on Tuesday 30th January 2007 7:05am for Goodbyes

I have just read through the whole thing, all 19 chapters. Very nice. Well thought out, planned, and executed. I am very impressed.I'm looking forward to whatever you write next.

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Monday 29th January 2007 1:16pm for Goodbyes

Very few can make as favorable an impression on the girl's parents as staring down a Dark Lord.

This was such a fine story. The acclaim of FFA defintely went up when you were chosen.

I join the many in hoping for a sequel, but anything from your imagination will be welcome.

Cheers!

Chiyo posted a comment on Sunday 28th January 2007 2:11pm for Goodbyes

If there isnt a sequel in the works to this I'll be most most upset.

That was without a doubt one of the best fanfics with a Harry/Tonks relationship I've ever read. And probably up there with some of my favorites period. I love the way you wrote their characters... everyones characters really.

Only critique I might make is the wording you had them do/say. Almost too proper and you seldom ever used contractions as most people would talk... using I am instead of I'm. Things like that. Nothing too major just didnt flow dialogue wise as smooth as it might would have otherwise.

Other than that... AWESOME story!

harryjerry posted a comment on Sunday 28th January 2007 1:29pm for Goodbyes

SEQUEL, SEQUEL, SEQUEL, SEQUEL ect...awesome job!!!

Wolfric posted a comment on Saturday 27th January 2007 11:43am for Goodbyes

I just read your story again and I enjoyed it a great deal. I hope there is a sequel in the works, I would love to see your take on Harry defeating Voldemort and manipulating the wizarding world. Thanks for your wonderful effort. W

Donald McLeod posted a comment on Saturday 27th January 2007 4:43am for Goodbyes

Nice set up for school. But is Narcissa looking to for a way out or revege for killind her sister? Great chapter, thank you for the update.