scribbler posted a comment on Wednesday 31st October 2007 2:46am

God, what an amazing story. I love it. You've done such an incredible job and I am deeply impressed. I was up until 4 am reading it and still didn't finish...but I just could not stop reading. It's wonderful and you should feel really good about what you've done. It's awesome.

regards,

the_scribbler

LesPaul posted a comment on Saturday 20th October 2007 9:44pm

Great story. Is there going to be a sequel?This storyline and ending is set up to follow into the schoolyear.

vladimir mithrander posted a comment on Saturday 20th October 2007 5:10pm

fuckin awesome. must continue. this has been one of the best straight fanfics of harry's that i have read in the couple years that i have been reading them. it is simply amusing to no end. i do hope though that little dwaco gets a clue. he has always been one of my favorite characters. oh and dumbles bashing is always met by a very hearty laugh. again great work plz keep it up. Vladimir Mithrander

Danster posted a comment on Saturday 13th October 2007 7:41pm

Great story... I couldn't stop reading it. The character building of Harry was fantastic, and the depth of tonks was equally amazing!

I'm looking foward to a sequel.

ProfessorBinns posted a comment on Thursday 11th October 2007 12:24pm

My Lord,

I must say, when I started this fic I was a bit hesitant. For one, I am a strict Harry/Ginny shipper (or so I thought). For another, I was troubled by how downright arrogant and mean Harry acted. Finally, I was a bit worried about how rich and powerful you made him.

However, you won me over, point by point. Your Tonks is so much more real than those we usually meet. Harry's character development is very convincing. And all the action is believable, too. Indeed, the politically complex world you create is actually more satsifying than what JKR did in DH. (Hers makes sense from a authorial perspective, of keeping the narrative line clear; yours makes sense for how the world works and how wars are actually won...you have actual training, and actual alliances...very sharp!)

Thus I am dying for the next fic! Please Please Please...how does this end????

Thanks!

pamie posted a comment on Friday 28th September 2007 10:03pm

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!

I LOVE THIS STORY! I READ IT ON FF.net AND I LOVE IT AS MUCH NOW AS THEN!

xD Sorry for screaming at you. xD

Erik Wiggins posted a comment on Thursday 30th August 2007 12:38pm

Well, I must say this has been a thoroughly enjoyable story. I like Harry as an unspeakable, this was original. I certainly hope we get to see your take on Voldemort's demise. I don't want this story to end. You have a lot of talent and depth. I'm looking forward to reading other work by you. - Erik

oso983 posted a comment on Sunday 19th August 2007 7:44pm

Hi, I already read this story for the second time. It is really amazing! Do you plan a sequel? I would really enjoy it!

Stonebrow posted a comment on Saturday 18th August 2007 4:41am

Having read this a second time, I find it is one of my favorite fics. It is also one of the most annoying, as it just stops. There's no resolution. I mean, it's a perfect place to stop and start a new segment, but to just completely end it is so frustrating. This is a well written story with a good plot, and those are few (though there's a higher density of them here at ffa). Even if you started writing another, better story, the potential of this story is wasted without a followup. You have a great original character in Horace, and Cal and the team 2 characters could be fleshed out very well. You've left with Harry needing to get the portkey activated, and his relationship with both Snape and Draco have been redefined.
All that said, I hate it when I see reviews demanding things from authors. I realize changing locations to Hogwarts means changing many other things too. You have to deal with classes and student relation and stuff. So it is understandable if you stop for reasons like that. But if you can, I think that you would make a very good sequel to this.
Here's hoping!

busted posted a comment on Friday 17th August 2007 2:14pm

Great story I really enjoyed it. I would love it if you had a sequel to this but It doest look like your starting one..

LDA posted a comment on Wednesday 8th August 2007 1:04pm

love the story!! question is are you going to write the sequel?? cant leave us fans hanging can you? lol

Taillon posted a comment on Tuesday 17th July 2007 9:25am

Haha, I think I'm in love!
I've been reading fic's for a few years now, and this is easily the best I've EVER read.

Hope to see it continue! And thank you for gracing us with this story :D.

Ezra'eil posted a comment on Friday 13th July 2007 12:17pm

Good ending. I liked the last few chapters, and the battle scenes. Hopefully you'll write a sequal.and]

Tyler_A posted a comment on Monday 9th July 2007 10:38pm

I love this story. I would like to point out that they whenever they talk, they don't use a word like won't. It would be will not. That kinda messes it up. I hope you make a sequel.

Stonebrow posted a comment on Thursday 21st June 2007 5:16am

This is just to good not to be seen all the way through. Unless you have artistic reasons for not finishing it, I think that the rest would definitely be an amazing addition. Since starting to read it, I have done nothing else but eat and sleep. Harry being an Unmentionable gives it enough potential for a sequel. Very good story.

Infin1x posted a comment on Sunday 17th June 2007 6:35am

This is the first time I have read a fic that didn't go to the end of the series, truly enjoyed it and then not really cared if it was continued. While it would be nice to see the end of Harry's time at Hogwarts, the final battle and an epilogue what is already here does an excellent job of doing what needs to be done. Harry has grown up found someone to love and really feels like it is complete in the way only life can be in the sense that it will go on.

pramod posted a comment on Wednesday 13th June 2007 9:56pm

excellent,very well written
do you have plans for a sequel? i mean the the school year and seventh year.Waiting for your next book eagerly.

with regards
pramod.

Jimmy posted a comment on Tuesday 12th June 2007 2:31pm

hello. I'm a huge fan of this story. I was just wondering why don't you do a sequel??? the way you ended it BEGS for a sequel!

Please at least answer that question.

Thanks.

Jimmy

Jimmy posted a comment on Sunday 10th June 2007 12:59pm

just curious, are you going to put up a sequel any time soon?

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Tuesday 29th May 2007 2:48am

Hermione figures out that Harry and Tonks are dating; however, Harry reminds Hermione that *Ron* is interested in *her*. (Busted!Hermione) Just as things were warming up, the nasty folks in white masks and drab robes crash the party...and run right into a rather brassed-off Harry (who had already Portkeyed the Grangers to Potter Manor). Both the Order (complete with Dumbledore) and the Unspeakables (complete with Marcus) show up (and Marcus takes custody of the prisoners from a relieved MLE Director Shacklebolt); meanwhile, Moody comments on the rather busted-up nature of the DEs being taken into custody. Dumbledore has a suspiscion that Harry is involved (again).